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Wednesday, March 30, 2005

Success33 and Shawn Princeton Win CafeRg's Splash Poetry Picture Challenge

Please join me and Congratulate Success33 First Place Naked In The Storm and Shawn Princeton Honorable Mention in the Splash Poetry Picture Challenge 'Naked In The Storm'

Two Awards voted by you our Splash Members and well deserving for fine poems.

Success33 ~ First Place Naked In the Storm Splash Poetry Challenge


Naked in the storm
by Success33

Naked in the storm I awake
confused, frightened and alone
as if dropped from the sky I wait
naked in the storm

Frightened but eager at what
awaites me I wait peched on stiletto
heels naked in the storm

My body aches in anticipation
of what pleasures you will inflict
upon me as I wait naked in the storm

My face hidden from the unknown as
my bare body embraces the unknown
I wait naked in the storm

My body explodes with bursts of sexual
energy escaping from my fingertips
eager to caress your awaiting man tool

Excited at the thought of you exploding
from the essence of you I wait naked in
the storm

I can feel your essence in the night air
as I sit, watch and wait naked in the storm
perched on stiletto heels

© 2005 success33 AKA Lyric

Shawn Princeton ~ Honorable Mention Naked In the Storm Splash Poetry Challenge


Storm Mask
by Shawn

Her lover left her stranded, screaming violated cries
she watches on with pitiful eyes, inside she feels demise.
By the shadows of the dark, the moon shines on her skin
and illuminates the careless slut that masks away the sin.
Prompted by the hurt and pain, fresh within her mind
Her senses come alive again, fears silhouette defined.
With the night so cold, she leans and licks her lips
and tastes the blood of fury from his frantic fists.

Here within the terror, as the wind howls across her face
just the sight of chickens to witness her disgrace.
Silently she breathes her prayers upon the night
and offers up salvation to remove the awful fright.
His tire prints on the soaken ground, brings tears to her eyes
as she gazes hard into the night her breath comes in sighs.
His ruthless manner brought mistrust and stole away her grace
and takes her oh so far away to escape without a trace.

© 2005 Shawn Princeton

ConGrats!! again!

Be sure to enter the Mother's Day Poetry Picture Challenge'A Mother's Love'

We are including our New Fresh Roasted Fair Trade Organic Coffee in the prize pool starting with Mother's Day Challenge. (sorry only USA shipping available).


5lbs of Fresh Roasted Fair Trade Organic Coffee

to be shared by both First Place and Honorable Mention.


Also check out the Editor's Choice Mother's Day Poetry Challenge at Rollin Thunder Poetry. Where the winners are chosen by the editors of Rollin Thunder Poetry. You can enter both.

1 Bloggers have commented

Anonymous said...

"Frightened but eager at what awaites me I wait peched on stiletto"
Okay, what does 'peched' mean?

But wait, it gets better.

"eager to caress your awaiting man tool..."

Now, I'm sorry but that is simply one of the worst lines I have ever read in poetry. Seriously. Come on, somebody back me up here. Your awaiting man tool?! And this won first prize? What the...? You've got to be kidding.
If that's the standard you're setting, I don't think I'll be coming here to read 'poetry' anymore.

Sean.

7:36 PM  

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